Hello, my name is jasprelao
I'm a newbie in game art, but I try to develop my skill by following this forum discussion, nice to meet you all...

Here is my third game project where I should make the artwork of the characters, the project named "Eternal Grace", those are the scribble of the main characters that will be playable in the game.

I hope you can give me comments that will open my eyes and develop my skill so that we'll getting better and better again.

Thanks...

MILLIA MELODIA

SLASH AVANDREY

RENAVIA AMARTHIA

AMGINE SIEGHART THEOLIUS

Hi Jesprelao!
I personally think the characters should have more definition in terms of lines, colors, and the overall presentation.

You might want to check out the inspiring artist thread by paprika:
www.in-gameart.com/index.php?option=com_...p;id=69&catid=20

But you have a nice scribble to start

Also how about telling us more about the game? such as the storyline, platforms, gameplay, and also character profile etc. That'll surely help others to comment on your character design artwork

cheers