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#109
aeon flux 2 Years ago Karma: 0  
hi this is my 1st post for in GAMEART:) critics and sugetion is welcome
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#111
Re:aeon flux 2 Years ago Karma: 6  
like i said before Mr. titittuwit, her nose is too big, and somehow the shadow from her hair is making her face more odd, just my 0.0001 cents. another pose of close up maybe....heheheh..
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#113
Re:aeon flux 2 Years ago Karma: 3  
cool! it's better than the last time i'd seen it i supposed...

well imo, add more specular, on the gun and on the suit. give more 'yellow' hue on the skin. other than that, it's nice...
wire, please...
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in the absences of light, darkness prevails....
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#114
Re:aeon flux 2 Years ago Karma: 0  
This is 3d? I thought it was a painting. You should smooth out the brush strokes, or make it neater so it looks like cell shading.

I think the face looks alright, but she looks too pale. Her face looks like in a different hue with her other skin part.
Maybe it's the lighting.

Give her eyes a highlight, it'll bring her to life.

Her feet is really unattractive, shouldn't she be wearing high heels?
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#118
Re:aeon flux 1 Year, 12 Months ago Karma: 0  
lazy to type anymore, i type quite long but cant submit my text all disappear... yahhhhhhh....
thank anyway....
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#119
Re:aeon flux 1 Year, 12 Months ago Karma: 0  
hahahhahahahahaha
now it can be submitted
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Re:aeon flux 1 Year, 10 Months ago Karma: 0  
Her foot need more detail
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